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As I clean up my mom’s house, two years after her dementia and stroke, finally became too much to handle, this piece resonates with me in so many different ways.

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Gordon, I'm deeply sorry and right there with you. What a befuddling, heart-shredding way to grieve a loved one. Thank you for sharing.

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Such a beautiful description of something so hard to explain.

The visceral descriptions of holding and trapping emotion is gorgeous – “After my grandfather died, her devotion to him pooled inside with nowhere to go.” That part came with feelings.

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Ahh thank you so much Claire. Means a lot. One of the best definitions of grief I've heard: "Love that has nowhere to go"

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Grief is my favourite topic for emotion, particularly that battle between what we feel inside and how the outside world handles it.

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Goodness. YES. The disconnect, the “life goes on”. It’s quite cruel, isn’t it?

If you’re very lucky here in the states, your workplace gives you 9 days bereavement. Who the fuck’s job was it to calculate sufficient grieving time, bc they got it very wrong.

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Oh the disconnect is fuuuucked. And then there’s the different stages of someone is still alive. Web of grief could be title for a piece on that one.

Oh that’s insanely lucky in my US experience – maybe Cali laws? Most give 3 days top. And not much better in the Uk 🫠

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I'm so excited to talk to you more about grief lol cry

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You read Grief is the thing with feathers? My favourite book of all time

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Kat, this was beautiful. You have a way with words that gets to the emotion better than most I've seen here. I feel like I should learn from you. It was honestly relieving to see you wrestle with the possibility of your getting dementia and how you turned the whole thing on its head. Obviously, I had never considered that. Dementia remains my greatest fear; I have thought about this a lot over the years. But your accepting and letting it go was inspiring.

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Anuradha ♥️ Trying to really receive your kind words, thank you. You are living your life courageously and out loud. I like to think that’s nicely preventative for us!

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Love how this one has evolved! Such important reflections. Excited to see the final version of Part 2, too.

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Couldn't have done it without your amazing edits and feedback, Emily. Thank you!

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I am glad how this piece came about. You showed us a door to your past memory, and it feels very universal. It made me remember mi abuelita, my grandma. And although there is a tendency to remember that last challenging part of their life, I think the invitation is there to cherish all the memories we have with those that shaped us and gave us the care that nurtured our hearts.

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Hi Hugo! I feel grateful you fully received that. It's been the bright spot in this long goodbye.

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I am obsessed with the way you have pieced and polished this piece. You have a beautiful and unique way with words, and I loved the little touches of the Asian immigrant experience throughout the piece.

I deeply resonated with the nudge to focus on what over why in finding a purpose. I will carry this piece with me for a long time

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Sondra! Many thanks to your clear, honest, supportive feedback. Can’t wait to read how your love letter turned out

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“Like you, I’m a tiny branch growing off of a giant sequoia of people. Their joy and sorrow has shaped me in ways known and mysterious. It’s too easy to forget I’m part of a great, unstoppable unfolding.”

What a testament to those before us. Those that fought battles (some literal) and struggled so we can have a better way. And it is your recognition of this privilege and our responsibility to living a good life in honor of them that inspires me.

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Ahh that touches me so much. They're rooting for us to do our thing, aren't they? Grateful I get to bear witness to your process.

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Fantastic story, Kat. Similar thing happened with my grandmother a few years ago. It all happens very fast — and we are all standing on the shoulders of others just as you say. Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you for reading, Foy 🙏🏼

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